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Friday, November 5, 2010

Blogpost 11/5

p. 343 # 3, Write a journey poem in six lines


Taking each ingredient, and carefully placing them into the pan
 

It’s almost time for Berniece, Pablo, and Mrs. Dalloway to enjoy their pancakes
 

The batter is ready; the trio begins their voyage to the other kitchen
 

While in the living room they stop, they cannot all be seen entering the kitchen at the same time
 

They breath out together, exhaling the delightful fumes of their creation
 

Everyone is full; nonsensical verses soon encompass their surrounding

2 comments:

  1. I think you pretty much accomplished what the assignment wanted you to do. Nothing really wrong with it. Good job.

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  2. It was interesting, I feel like that ending line has a special meaning. Good job.

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